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【试题出处】 2023年英语高考全国甲卷写作部分第一节
【试题】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写

的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅
涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分。
I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday’s biology class make a big

change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we in‐
sects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and

beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or de‐
scribed their living habits. She even played some recordings of their singing,

what was fun. Now, I’ve come to love those of small living things. In the eve‐
ning, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects be‐
come more meaningful to me.

【答案】
I used to ∧ afraid of insects, but last Friday’s biology class make a big

be made
change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we in-

us
sects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and

butterflies
beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or
beautiful and

described their living habits. She even played some recordings of their sing‐
ing, what was fun. Now, I’ve come to love those of small living things. In the

which

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